Hope you like it...
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HardcoreKellyFan4Life |
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Let me know what you think...I've got a lot of it written alreadyt and it's hopefully gonna be something you aren't expecting
Hope you like it... |
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Kelzfan123 |
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This is really good so far! I thought that the flashback was very sweet.
Thank you to Erin! |
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kelly n justin fan |
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that was good. And sweet. Can't wait to read more. Welcome to the board!
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HardcoreKellyFan4Life |
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haha. I actually was a member of the board and wrote the story..."What my life has brought to me," but I am a poster at the express, so I just kept
my usename from there.
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Kelzfan123 |
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That would be great! Ah, I see.
Thank you to Erin! |
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KCJG02 |
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yay new story! yes, please post more - that would be great!
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KCJG02 |
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loved it! its so good. i loved the tree flashback! cant wait for more, and to see what happens next and to find out about their past!
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kelly n justin fan |
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It was really good. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Kelzfan123 |
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One thing that I noticed in both of the chapters is that a lot of the sentences seemed rushed, and that they parts of certain paragraphs are a bit choppy and
rushed. I don't really know how to fix that though. I hope you understand what I'm talking about, though.
I really am intrigued, because we don't know what actually happened, or why she's THAT upset. It will be interesting when they finally meet up again. I'm super excited about where this is going. Please update again, soon!
Thank you to Erin! |
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kelly n justin fan |
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Aww poor Kelly and Justin. I hope they see eachother soon. oh I wonder what Justins mom want. can't wait for the nexy update.
Justin is all mine!!
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KCJG02 |
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just re-read - i hope you update this story soon!
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HardcoreKellyFan4Life |
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Hey! Glad you are interested in seeing it continue, I have it written on my laptop, so I will try to post it tomorrow.
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kelly n justin fan |
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Oh, I can't wait for the next chapter.
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HardcoreKellyFan4Life |
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New chapter is up!
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kelly n justin fan |
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Thank you so much! Aww poor Kelly. Hope she doesn't stress to much over it. Great Job!
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KCJG02 |
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love it! cant wait for more and to see what happens once they see each other =)
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kelly n justin fan |
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I just reread the story. Update whenever you can.
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HardcoreKellyFan4Life |
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I will be updating soon hopefully, I have the next section of the story written, but can't think of a next chapter...it'll be up soon I hope.
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kelly n justin fan |
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SWEET!
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kelly n justin fan |
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aww poor kelly. I can't wait for the next chapter. I can't watch the video now cause the computer i am on dosen't have speakers so i will have to
do it on my ipod.
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